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The Secret Formula to Cover Letter Success

The Secret Formula to Cover Letter Success

Nina Kim | AllHealthcare

March 24, 2010

Paragraph 4: End with immense gratitude and an action item

Now that you’ve charmed and impressed the hiring manager, you need to end strongly and proactively. Always end with an action item. Say how you’ll follow up and how you very much look forward to it. Be sure to be gracious and thank the reader for his time.

In the example below, the writer tells the hiring manager when she will be available and asks for permission to contact. Now, asking for permission to contact is merely a formality. Hopefully, the hiring manager will contact you once he has read your captivating and amazing cover letter.

However, if he doesn’t, try to follow up in an email to the hiring manager. Do not call him. With so many applicants, hiring managers find phone calls from potential applicants highly annoying. Also, if the job listing specifically says to not contact the hiring managers, then don’t!

Your last paragraph can pretty much look the same for all of your cover letters — but only this last paragraph! You always want to customize your cover letter for the specific job listing otherwise.



I will be in Sunnyvale the week of March 21, and with your permission, I would like to contact you in the next few weeks to see if we can meet in person. For your review, I have enclosed a resume. Thank you so much for your time and consideration.


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    emersonferguson

    7 months ago

    4 comments

    Trying to figure out what more i need to do as the cover letters that i am sending out are for companies that are not big corporations and may only employ 30-75 employees. These types of businesses dont really fall into the category. I need to customize my cover letter but am pretty stuck on how to do it.

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    w00628593

    about 1 year ago

    2 comments

    a cover letter to a english teacher about how your doing in her class past present future

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    abgabbard

    over 1 year ago

    2 comments

    I'll be honest I have sent out over 50 cover letters in this general format and I haven't received a single call... Not sure what I am doing wrong but i'm about ready to go back to the old ways

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    dboswell1

    almost 2 years ago

    2 comments

    Thanks I really appreciate these tips!!

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    denise_eml

    almost 2 years ago

    4 comments

    I hope this tips work for the last place where I applied !! I will let you know buddies !!

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    Stephanie15

    almost 2 years ago

    4 comments

    WOW now it all makes sense. thank you for posting this article.

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    usha88

    over 2 years ago

    4 comments

    Thank you, I really enjoyed that. I read another article and I've been writing my cover letters all wrong according to this. Thank you for such great advice.

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    Frank_Ball

    almost 3 years ago

    19756 comments

    Please keep your comments on topic to the article -- Any comments posted with embedded links leading to questionable infected sites outside MonsterCollege will be removed and the poster's account will be banned from MonsterCollege. Thank you.

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    willmerrill

    about 3 years ago

    30 comments

    This is pretty solid. Thanks

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    ValV

    about 3 years ago

    2 comments

    I tried it...and got a interview call the same day.

  • Belushicollege

    editor

    about 3 years ago

    396 comments

    Thanks Nina.

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