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The Secret Formula to Cover Letter Success
Nina Kim | AllHealthcare
March 24, 2010
Paragraph 3: Highlight your education or latest experience and again, show how it relates directly to the job requirements
This third paragraph of your cover letter should definitely touch upon what kind of education and certifications you have. If you find this paragraph ends up too short, you can also talk about your most recent experience, what you’ve gained from it, and how it applies to the job for which you’re currently applying.
This third paragraph should be as specific as the second paragraph, functioning mainly as an extension of the second paragraph.
The most important part of this paragraph is that you always end with this following sentence: “I know my education and experience will make me a valuable asset to the _____ team as the ______.” This will clarify to the hiring manager exactly what you’re applying for (just in case there’s any confusion).
In the example below, the writer specifically mentions what kind of education she has and what it has taught her about being a nurse. Because that part is shorter, she then goes on to highlight her latest accomplishments as the ICU neonatal staff nurse. Again, all of the qualities and experiences she mentions relates directly back to the types of qualities and experiences needed for the job.
I received my bachelor’s degree in nursing from Shining Star University and passed the NCLEX in 2006. My nursing classes trained me to be meticulous, compassionate, and resourceful, and taking the NCLEX has instilled in me determination, perseverance, and sound judgment. Additionally, my most recent experience as a neonatal floor nurse at Los Gatos General Hospital has considerably piqued my interest in the maternal instinct and nurturing long-term relationships with babies and their families. I know my education and experience will make me a valuable asset to the Sunnyvale Community Hospital team as the ICU neonatal staff nurse.
emersonferguson
6 months ago
4 comments
Trying to figure out what more i need to do as the cover letters that i am sending out are for companies that are not big corporations and may only employ 30-75 employees. These types of businesses dont really fall into the category. I need to customize my cover letter but am pretty stuck on how to do it.
w00628593
about 1 year ago
2 comments
a cover letter to a english teacher about how your doing in her class past present future
abgabbard
over 1 year ago
2 comments
I'll be honest I have sent out over 50 cover letters in this general format and I haven't received a single call... Not sure what I am doing wrong but i'm about ready to go back to the old ways
dboswell1
almost 2 years ago
2 comments
Thanks I really appreciate these tips!!
denise_eml
almost 2 years ago
4 comments
I hope this tips work for the last place where I applied !! I will let you know buddies !!
Stephanie15
almost 2 years ago
4 comments
WOW now it all makes sense. thank you for posting this article.
usha88
over 2 years ago
4 comments
Thank you, I really enjoyed that. I read another article and I've been writing my cover letters all wrong according to this. Thank you for such great advice.
Frank_Ball
over 2 years ago
19756 comments
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willmerrill
about 3 years ago
30 comments
This is pretty solid. Thanks
ValV
about 3 years ago
2 comments
I tried it...and got a interview call the same day.
editor
about 3 years ago
396 comments
Thanks Nina.