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5 Cover Letters That Worked

Tania Khadder | Excelle

February 23, 2010

The Success Story

This recent college graduate was looking for a job in a less-than-desirable economy. And just like our previous candidate, not only did he get the interview, he also got the job.

This cover letter works because it’s specific. The bullet points halfway down tell one success story after another. We don’t have to wonder whether or not he knows how to save a company money — we can see evidence of it.

It’s not easy being specific about your accomplishments when your actual work experience is minimal, but this candidate makes what work he has done seem very impressive.


Please accept my cover letter for the Project Analyst position currently available at XXXXX. I understand that we are in the midst a recession, and as unemployment rises — your inbox fills with applicants. This short letter and attachments are my life’s work thus far. I thank you for taking a minute out of your day to read it.

My name is XXXXXX, I am a senior at XXXXXX University studying Marketing with a focus in Economics. Currently I work part-time for the XXXXXXX Department of Higher Education and XXXXXXXXXX, an interactive marketing agency in Kansas City. I recently finished up my collegiate athletic career last fall, and have relished in the extra time that I have been able to spend towards my career; traveling, and enjoying life outside football. As a student, I was able to travel Europe, complete two internships within the industry, work as a dive master in Central America, and keep meaningful part-time jobs that I still maintain.

Along the way learning time-management, teamwork, and gaining perspective that will continue to help me the rest of my life.

Here are a few of the projects I have worked on:
• Developed a marketing concept that saved XXXXXXXXXXXXX more than $20,000
• Wrote proposal for $25,000 grant from state of Missouri, managed budget as well as work-study students
• Established marketing program that increased participation 143% from the previous year
• Collaborated with a designer to develop media for a kiosk within Sprint Center in Kansas City
• Managed user account inquiries with XXXXX XXXXXXX, a multi-million dollar account
• Worked with creative writer and CFO to develop content for a Podcast recorded at XXXXXXXXXXXX, Kansas City

The XXXXX reputation does not need to be elaborated on — simply put, it has always been a pillar in the industry. I know my experience can contribute to the continued success of The XXXXX Company. I am motivated and looking forward to the next challenge that draws on my corporate and agency experience.

Attached is a current copy of my resume and professional references. Letters of recommendation are available upon request. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me at XXX.XXX.XXXX or


The Mistake →

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    4 months ago


    a pair of beautiful eyes, gazing quietly not far from the river in a small play slapstick adults and children. The river is broad-minded, she silently from the heart of people receiving a joy burst from the depths of the soul, become this season, coolest gifts of nature.Between fields, into a film into a piece of corn, green, as if the rows of guards, waiting for their homes. Between villages, mountain forest, often hear the millennium change cuckoo singing, singing a simple, hard-working songs. I always feel that the cuckoo is called "peas, corn," but seems to listen to the feeling is another story. After leaving home, you never hear it sing, and naturally it did not know exactly what to sing, but I know that sound sing, already branded in my soul, in a midnight dream back, took me into the little village, into the patch of garden, while listening to a cuckoo from the sounds of nature.Autumn has come. Autumn, joy, harvest, farmers filled with smiling faces, is that one of the perspiration.This multi-season farming, playing millet, the corn, sweet potato digging, incoming farming, bending the backbone of farmers, peasants joy sleeping dreams. For children, this season is wanton slapstick mountain-fields is fruitful branches. A variety of fruits, all show off the most mature grace. A persimmon, high up in the branches, as if one lantern, truly beautiful. Orange has begun to yellow, to the kids liked the sweet and sour taste, this pick in the trees, a few Baba looked under the tree, waiting for the tree to the children dropped then rush rushing, clamor. Under jujube, often took the children one by one bamboo staves, craned their necks, Fengyun knock, knock sinking. Shouting, here, here, over there, over there as well ...... childish, woven into a joy, in the autumn fields, weaving harvest songs.I like the winter. The memory of that snow in the world, how many times uppermost. Winter home, no Chairman Mao described by the "ice, A thousand Piao." Snow's hometown, is quiet. It is light and falls hills, lightly swept over the river, beating farmers silent window, a white world quietly bring.Winter is silence, the sound will be heard barking occasionally between, villages. Sound down, the branches of the snow like being scared in general, "Chi Chi flutter" down, crushing splashes of flowers open in the winter, opened in the children's dreams.Creek drunk, will clear a pillow dream deep, hidden spring coming years; drunk mountain, snow,

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    11 months ago


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    about 5 years ago


    No idea how this cover letter managed to be successful. The first paragraph alone is riddled with errors and an attempt to be fancy with use of hyphenations.

    "I understand that we are in midst OF a recession..." -- Like really, how the hiring manager didn't notice the lack of preposition is beyond me. Maybe the writer and hiring manager both think we should revert back to the 1800s in regards to language.

    And then to no avail, the very next segment the writer pretends to know how to use hyphenations. "... and as unemployment rises -- your inbox fills with applicants." "Hey, look mom, I can use other symbols in my writing besides commas and periods I'm so smart." Last time I checked, hyphenations are supposed to be used for adding onto an already complete sentence providing further information whether it be an opinion or fact. Removing, "... your inbox fills with applicants." and your left with "... and as unemployment rises." Yes, good job Scotty leave the hiring manager hanging, but maybe he likes cliff hangers because apparently thats how you got hired.

    I don't know if this article gives me hope or despair. Hopeful in regards to someone as verbally challenged as this miscreant is capable of landing a job or despair in the fact that someone with the same lack of finesse in the English language probably will take my job.

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    over 5 years ago


    This is very helpful!

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    almost 6 years ago


    Wow, this article helps a lot. For a long time I was frustrated when it came to writing cover letters because it seemed I had no direction. I didn't realize I should be writing my letter for the company and what qualifications I meet that are beneficial to the company, instead I just wrote about me and my achievements and/or qualities. If you hadn't guessed by now, I wasn't very successful. Thanks for the great advice!

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    almost 6 years ago


    I need to Print out three sample cover letters for my class, then i can make my own.

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    almost 6 years ago


    I need to write a real good cover letter for collector position

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    almost 6 years ago


    I need to write a cover letter for a management position.

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    almost 6 years ago


    I need to write a cover letter for a Security Officer position

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    almost 6 years ago


    i need to write a cover letter for a child care position

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    almost 6 years ago


    Please keep your comments on topic to the article -- Any comments posted with embedded links leading to questionable infected sites outside MonsterCollege will be removed and the poster's account will be banned from MonsterCollege. Thank you.

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    about 6 years ago


    For all of the droning-on about typos, grammar, and proof-reading, the last sentence of the letter from the magazine editor (of all people) just jumped off of the page when I read it. Surely, she meant, "Thank you so much for your time and consideration." However, she wrote, "Thank you for so much your time and consideration." This just proves that even the best of us sometimes miss a typo or other mistake. This is why it is so important to have someone with impeccable literary skills proof-read something as important as a resume or cover letter -- actually, any important document should be proofed by more than one person. For something as important as this, one can never be too careful.

  • Masquerade_max50


    over 6 years ago


    These are some excellent examples of cover letters. I feel inspired to write some much better ones now. However, I don't want to write a completely new one each time, it's just not very efficient. I'm wondering how much of each of these cover letters was reused for many positions.

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    over 6 years ago


    Good info!

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    over 6 years ago


    Good points, you have to make a letter directly to the job, and let them know why your are fit for this job more so than the other 2 hundred resumes.